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Post by gabe on Jan 8, 2006 18:21:08 GMT 12
Silent Booze is da 1st character he made b4 da appearance of Noodle so better change it
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Post by bacon on Jan 10, 2006 8:28:09 GMT 12
ok i'll change it somehow somewhere sometime
i think i'll have the thing done by my American saturday
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Post by bacon on Jan 11, 2006 14:23:43 GMT 12
actually no i won't couse i have alot of school stuff and i don't feel like thinking of a way to switch and reswithc
unless you have an idea how and would like to tell me?? ?
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Post by bacon on Jan 18, 2006 15:06:14 GMT 12
Chapter 2-Eternal forest
After forming the Malice Squad, Noodle and Lionheart got out of the Eternal forest and headed for the great city of Bacoony. Bacoony was the city where the great Bacon family lived. Anyways Bacoony was the last city before the Great Plains which separated Orr in half. Many bandits roamed the plains so Bacoony was filled with bodyguards for crossing the plains. They thought they could find some strong people for their squad. Hours of searching failed no one would go along for free. Their only option was to ask the Bacon family for some soldiers, even though they didn’t think they’d have any luck. Upon arriving to the castle they had to pass through many checkpoints of gourds. Finally they reached the king. The king’s name was Thinger Myrod Bacon and he ruled the city of Bacoony. They pleaded with the king to lend them soldiers. He said all of his troops where off fighting the guilds, but they could have some of his prisoners if they could find his son who had ran away into the Eternal Forest and bring him back home. As they left the castle they saw a young women crying and screaming “Oh brother”. When searching through the forest Noodle came upon a carcass of a dead animal. It was warm and flesh had been bitten off. Someone had been through earlier and it wasn’t’ to long ago. Noodle spotted a trail of broken branches so they followed until they came to a dead body. They knew this was Thinger’s son and that they would have to carry his dead body back to him. As Lionheart approached to pick up his body he saw it was covered in symbols. When Lionheart touched the body the symbols glowed, and the body started to hover. While hovering, a narrow strip of ice came out of the body and attached itself to Lionheart. Then it started covering his whole body. In the distance Noodle saw 3 axetaxess charging at them. Noodle uttered a spell incasing Lionheart, himself and the body in flame. One of the axetaxes charged right into the flame and was burned into ashes instantly. The other two circled around waiting for the spell to stop. Lionheart then put the dead body in the fire, and then the fire destroyed the body and melted the ice on him. Out in the distance a horn was heard then from up in the trees an arrow shot out and set an axetaxe on fire. Another arrow came and hit it through the leg and crippled it. Seizing their chance Noodle ended the spell and Lionheart charged at the hurt axetaxe. It was no match for him in its weakened condition. Noodle destroyed the other one with a powerful spell. Out of the trees came a man with a bow that had lightning running up and down it. He was thanked for his help. When asked who he was he said he was the son of Thinger Bacon. The reason he left home was he received a note saying that the bow he wanted to buy in secret was in stock and he could get it. So he left in secret and hoped no one would realize but they did. When he was asked if he knew anything about the body with symbols he told them that a man in black put the body there and the axetaxes were watching in the distance ever since. He then said he would be going back home because he knew why Noodle and Lionheart came. When they came the king was most gracious and he said he would keep to his word. They had the choice of two out of twenty-three of the prisoners. They were displeased at getting only two and only getting prisoners who might abandon them at any time, but they had no other options. While searching they found a man praying in his cell, they guards said he was there for trying to protect a man who stole money. He was known as Chong Fat for he was a rather large person from a far off land. It was decided that he could be trusted and he happily agreed when given the chance to get out of jail. The next person they came across a women sitting in a cell hunched in a corner. The guards said she was in there for trying to steal one of the prince’s bow. Thinking if someone was good enough to sneak into a castle the could be an asset, they asked to talk to her. She said her name was Kira Escae and she was a great ranger who lived in the woods. After more questions it was decided she was a good choice and she agreed to go. So the Malice Squad set off across the Great planes with two new members.
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Post by bacon on Jan 18, 2006 15:06:47 GMT 12
sorry that i took so long i had alot of school and i probablly have errors and i'll get started on the next part tommorrow
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Post by bacon on Jan 21, 2006 8:19:10 GMT 12
comments?
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Post by lionheart on Mar 1, 2006 23:39:47 GMT 12
loL! we're a bit slo won the replies eh wow it's been nearly a month!! well...i'm yet to read the story Gimme a sec....or another month prehaps
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